tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4189206877177236135.post363481620255518102..comments2014-03-06T20:01:03.673-07:00Comments on The Pegasus Rider: Yonder - AllAlexis Smolenskhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03251006335957747117noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4189206877177236135.post-42289295778158862862011-09-05T20:24:29.326-06:002011-09-05T20:24:29.326-06:00Wow.
Definitely better than some of the fantasies...Wow.<br /><br />Definitely better than some of the fantasies I've had the misfortune to read.<br /><br />I wouldn't change a thing except for the main character's name. It's too long and doesn't flow well. It would be something as simple as changing Azariah to Azarah that would make a world of difference to me.Bradyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09023135056577390451noreply@blogger.com